Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Monday, February 7, 2011

Superbowl

The Packers have won the Superbowl 31-25. This year I went to my friends house and watched the whole thing with his family and mine. This year instead of having dinner we just had snacks because we were to excitied about the game. Everything that was good except the adds on the T.V. There were only a couple good adds like the Dorritos and the one where someone said that Justin Bieber looks like a girl. I though the halftime show was good this year I usually don't watch the halftime show but, it was good this year. I'm glad the Packers won.

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