Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Monday, June 4, 2012

The Toilet That Could


Once upon a time, there lived a toilet. It was a magical toilet, he had a gold rim and had an automatic seat warmer. This toilet was living happily in is fellow toilet kingdom. One day in the fine kingdom a toilet was rushed to the plumbers because it was over flowing with water and flooding the city. For some reason the magical toilet felt that he had to go to the plumbers because a toilet was in need. The magical toilet quick went on his trusty segway and sped off into the sunset.

The next day he arrived at the plumbers. The toilet went in and discovered the toilet in need had a nice turtle neck that was the color tickle me pink. This color obviously told the toilet that this was also a magical toilet. He quickly shoved the plumber out of the way and performed CPR. The pink toilet came alive. Then the toilets lived happily ever after.