Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Chain Story Comdey

Once there was a guy named Fred. He was walking down the street and found an apple. He took a bite of the apple, he thought the apple was tasty. But then he fainted. When he awoke, he was in somewhere dark. He saw a light and went towards it. Then BOOM! He was died and he went to heaven. 20 days later, God brought him back to life where he died. He had brought him here because he wanted to find out who got that poison apple. Then he walked out and the same thing happened. Soon later the police found out that the guy who gave him poison was a terroist. The terroist killed him.

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