Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Random Story

Once upon a time there was a kid named Teddie. He was walking in a cave, he was looking for a spoon to eat his jelly with. Many people asked "Why don't you go to the store". He would always say "I have no money". As Teddie searched he could never find that spoon. Finally he decided to give up on looking but, he came across a map to the golden spoon. The best spoon of them all.
So Teddie set off to find this golden spoon. He heard from a wise old camper. That it makes everything taste good. So Teddie's jelly would taste even better. The map said to go to China that is where the hidden temple is. So Teddie bought a plane ticket and went to China in search of the golden spoon.
When Teddie arrived at the temple he was surpised of how many people were there and that he had to pay to get in. He found out is was a tourist place. He searched the whole temple and didn't find the golden spoon. Then he fell over and hit the ground hard and it activated a secert door and fell in. He was surpised that the golden spoon was hiden in there and he wondered what SSUPPPLIEES CLLOSSET meant. When he picked up the spoon the building started to fall apart. He ended up escaping and eating his jelly with the golden spoon.

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