Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Friday, January 14, 2011

The Pearl

The main lesson is that if you become to greedy something bad is bond to happen. Also this book was a tragic mode of literature. In a tragic mode of literature is starts out with the world in in conflict with the main character. The conflict is that Coyotito gets sick. Then the rise to power happens. The rise to power is they find the pearl and they cure Coyotito. Then the human flaw was that Kino became greedy. Then the tragic fall is that they have to leave because now everyone is trying to kill them because they have the pearl. The end which is death or death symbolism is that Coyotito dies.

1 comment:

  1. Good information was conveyed in this post,however, you need to use a variety of sentence starters to make the writing more interesting. Be careful not to use the word "the" to begin sentences; mix it up a little bit. Also, you might want to delete the multiple posts you have; I think I counted three of the same. oops!

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