Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Tuesday, January 18, 2011

The lesson on Pearl

The lesson is when you become to greedy something bad is bond to happen. The bad thing that happened was when Coyotito was shot in the head by the hunter with the rifle. They became to greedy and there loss was Coyotito. They are lucky to be alive also Juana could have gotten shot instead of Coyotito. The lesson is not to become greedy.

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