Writing Goals

Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Thursday, January 26, 2012

Thank Ma'm Response Question 1

That everything happens for a reason so you have to be smart to not risk anything because everything happens for a reason. If you take things the wrong way something bad might happen to you but, in this story the boy was lucky that the lady treated him how she did. One example is the Bucks lost last night 97-92 they lost because they didn't score the most points. They didn't score the most points because they are not the most talented team in the NBA. The team they played had much more talent so therefore the Bucks lost. That is an example on why everything happens for a reason.


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