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Work on thesis statement makes sense with the introduction



Give more support for my opinions



Varity of sentence starters



Monday, October 17, 2011

Misleading Documents

Author's Note: This essay is about why does the main character complain about something but, always needs there help or always goes back to an agency.

10/17/11

Nick Majeskie

Dear Alex Rider,

I have been reading documents on your life (Alex Rider series) and seem to me that you are working for an agency named MI6. It occurs to me that you always say you hate MI6 and they are never there for you when you need them. So if you hate them so much then why do you go back to them?

I don’t understand the constant wail of you saying they are no help when they saved your life many times. If they really didn’t help you would be died by now. Then if they weren’t a help you would be died from the storm breaker computer from the malicious made man that hated England. Also they give you gadgets, for every possible thing that could happen, such as every time you get locked in a cell you find away to escape with the gadgets. Even though your disgust them you always go back to them. At first you seemed to like working for them but, obviously that has changed. Finally the last couple of reasons are you got yourself into this in the first document (First book) I read about you it said you were snooping around and you found out about of them and then you had to become one. So you brought this upon yourself.

There is many ways you could have went about this. You didn’t have to snoop around you could just have stayed normal. You could have just gone back to school but, you had to know so now you’re too far into this now. So you did this to yourself. So suck it up and do not complain about it.

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